We have redrafted our storyboard to bring it more into line with the ideas we have had while discussing the original draft. We have changed the opening as we feel it might have been too confusing / not had enough impact. We have also looked more at creating a more suspenseful atmosphere at the end without giving too much away.
Our first storyboard was a bit of a mess, however this one in which we have re arranged has worked out for the better, as we all have a sense on what needs to happen and what shot we need to do for each scene. Instead of having the titles come up on the screen we have decided to make them appear on the card of the flowers, which would look more efficient. We have also changed the idea of the sister discovering the photo, as it gave away to much away about the story for the first two minutes. We want it to be portrayed as scary but by also leaving the audience in suspense. Leah Zalani
ReplyDeleteThere is such an obvious improvement in our second story board as we all worked together to figure every single shot that we were hoping to use to make sure our day of filming would work out better and be smooth. We also rearranged the story board to make sure the shots weren't too choppy. We also added in some really great ideas for our credits appearing on the tag in the bunch of flowers on the grave, and the name of the film appearing on the letter.
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